Yay I like that you're constantly repeating the fact that Nick still thinks he possesses these moral values and the fact that Nick still admires Gatsby for his ability to dream has also been well covered too. :-) I also like that you included Jordan at the beginning of the video, which shows that Nick still cares and is concerned about her. Good job!
I think it's a good idea to keep your monologue seems more like a written text than a spoken one because it really shows Nick's style of narration, through which he can show off himself that he is educated. Plus, mentioning about Jordan shows Nick is responsible for what he does unlike the people from East Egg.
Yay I like that you're constantly repeating the fact that Nick still thinks he possesses these moral values and the fact that Nick still admires Gatsby for his ability to dream has also been well covered too. :-) I also like that you included Jordan at the beginning of the video, which shows that Nick still cares and is concerned about her. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think it's a good idea to keep your monologue seems more like a written text than a spoken one because it really shows Nick's style of narration, through which he can show off himself that he is educated. Plus, mentioning about Jordan shows Nick is responsible for what he does unlike the people from East Egg.
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